Fox tries to chomp mouse and he he ran up the tree and he hid behind a sleeping owl the fox grabbed he stick aned flung the mouse into the air and he fell on a frozen pond and got shove in to snow so did the fox an he all most drownd the fox saved the mouse
great writing but I think you should add some punctuation other then that your writings really good
what happened after the fox was saved what happened to the mouse did the fox eat him after
mouse should have got eaten 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰